An Obscure Day

in the morning
when the mist lies low
above the earth
and that which has risen to move is only a shade

to be revealed once it draws closer
the unseen seen in a moment
such is the promise of
an obscure day



  1. Very nicely written poem. Short and simple but there is a certain emotion, a serenity and calmness,. I love it.
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    1. Thank you so much! That serenity and calmness is so elusive sometimes, yet writing often provides such for me. I did visit your space. Continued blessings in your writing!

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